In all the animals. I like tiger best. Why? Because the tiger is beautiful. They are different from other animals. They aren’t shy. They look like very fierce. I toss some meat to the tiger. I love it. I can think that the tiger is sad. They often make some noise. It misses its family. So other animals. But I think the zoo is good for animals. People will to protect them. They will have many food to eat. They don’t worry about their lives. And the zoo can help people to stop animals from going extinct.
Later, we were hungry. We ate any snacks. There are juicefruit and bread. I feel very happy today. I hope next time we can go there.
译文：今天，我们去了动物园。我已经有很长时间没去过那儿了。天气非常暖和。每件事情都是棒的。我和我爸爸、妈妈、弟弟（两个）、一个朋友约好10：30在动物园见面。但我们到动物园时已经11：20。这使她等了50分钟。可怜的朋友，我们觉得对不起她。接着，我们开始参观。我们买了六张票进了动物园。首先，我们看猴子。那些猴子一会儿跳一会儿跑。人们说这儿有许多猴子。但我只看见三只。接着我们来到熊猫的家。这儿有许多人。我看不到熊猫的影子。我只能看见人。接下来，我们看了袋鼠、海豹、骆驼、蛇、狗、狮子和老虎等。
在所有的动物中，我最喜欢老虎。为什么？因为老虎是漂亮的，他们与其它动物不同。他们不会害羞。你们看起来非常凶猛。我扔一些肉给老虎。我爱他。我看得出老虎是难过的。他们常发出吵闹声。他想念家人。其它动物也一样。但我认为动物园对动物来说是好的，人们将会保护他们。他们将会有很多食物可以吃。他们不用担心他们的生活。动物园可以止动物面临灭绝。
稍后，我们觉得饿了，我们吃一些小吃。有果汁、水果和面包。我觉得非常高兴。希望下一次也能来这儿。
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