以下是我给叔叔的信
Dear Jack,
How are you doing? It is so nice to read your
mail again.
Today I see a so lovely lamb at the zoo, I feed
it some water and leaves. And I hold it. It's so
soft, I love it very much. I see a dog, it is bark
to me. I'm so afraid. I think it is so angry. I see
a giraffe,too.Its neck is very long! Do you like
these animals?
Love ,
Dolly
以下是叔叔的回信
Hi! Dolly,
I am doing well. Thank you!
Wow! you saw so many lovely animals at the zoo. You
had a good time! Where is the zoo? I don't think it
was the zoo inside Zhong Shang Park, because it would
be very difficult for that zoo to take a giraffe. I
always like nature. I always try to visit zoos,
botany or aquariums whenever I can. I enjoy watching
animals or fish.
I want to change your sentences a little bit:
"a so lovely lamb", changed to "a very lovely lamb" or
"a lovely lamb".
"it is bark to me", changed to "it barks at me".
Love, Jack