I want to be a teacher， I will be a very kind teacher。 If student make some mistakes， I"ll forgive them。 I"ll help every student。 Do you want a teacher like me?
修改后：I want to be a teacher。If i am a teacher， I will be a very kind teacher。 If students make some mistakes， I"ll try my best to help every student and I"ll forgive them。Do you like a teacher like me?